Sela Locke

Although I am risking more than my life simply to tell you quite a little of this very odd history, I will do so, in hope that someone, somewhere, shall ...

This was an almost exact copy (character wise) of Twilight. I just read it and... whoa. The plot is hardly different, and I just feel like... well, say we'd made ...

Gosh, thanks! And yes, I'm working on a prologue thing. ^^

Still way too much like Twilight, definitely. Try to think of your own storyline, not one you read in a book that, even with the interesting storyline, was certainly not ...

The 'only' is a purposeful repetition, but I might fix it. Other than that, I'll get going! (sometime. X_X) Oh, and Keyli is not in a good place to show ...

Okay, before anything else, thank you for reviewing! No one seems to enjoy my stories enough to give advice, at least not often. :( Quiet and still.... hmmm. I honestly ...

I look for deep weather, To take me down away, The light seems far gone now, And nothing have I to say. I struggle in the smother'ngs, Of day's lightest ...

I already told you, in this kind of story, it GETS background, only, it comes slowly. I only know of a few damn good writers that can make you understand ...

Well, hello there! Call me Sela. :D Okay, onto the review! The girl fliped the long blonde hair out of her face as she brushed a few dried tears from ...

Whoahohoho! Yuss, he bees vurry ood. Hooevr, OI fink dat... you know what? I'm going to speak coherently. So there! As I was saying, I think that Trey needs to ...

It was certainly interesting, but I noticed some odd sentences: She recognized it as chloroform before going unconscious. 'Going unconscious'? That's just... awkward. If you want to keep it simple, ...

Vell, vellcome tooh ze YWS! I ovten troi tooh vrite deefren zen iz noormal, joost furr fon. Eef zoo erz connfoozed, zen I apoligooze. Ennywayz, I tooh zink I vill ...

I’m aloud to go here. Oops! I think you mean allowed. Must've been tired, eh? There were other mistakes, but if anyone ever gets around to reviewing besides me, I'm ...

Rick strode into Drake’s office-like room, and then over to Drake himself, who was sitting quietly in a small chair by the fire, as though he hadn’t heard the wolf ...

Whoa. Really, really rushed. I felt like I was shoved on a roller-coaster I didn't like and forced to ride the whole way. I mean, you can hardly tell who ...